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Hotel Candles

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I see us both, in time
Two candles burning 
behind the thin pane window
of a seaside hotel

Outside, wind and rain
rage hard against the faded awnings
and the flaking paint
of this inclement town

Our flames shiver
then bloom again
Such is life
and slow slipping wax

I’m consumed with all our years
and all the storms
and all the fuel
we burned in our love

I see us both, in time
reflected in the glass
I remain in awe of your light
as you add your light to mine...

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:36

There is so much in this poem to like. I began to pick out pieces and had to stop, there were so many.
I’ll just cite the last two lines! Perfect

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Tom

Mon 25th Nov 2024 13:21

I saw the attached painting and thought it might inspire a poem. It did.

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