Drunk
The flood stole in throughout the night,
she listened from an upstairs room
for cattle moaning in their stalls
and those who could no longer speak.
The silence brought the stars to sky
and then the trickle, gulp and suck
that blanketed the roads and fields
reflecting pallor of the dawn.
From window to window she went and heard
the first uncertain song of birds.
And as the dark was washed away
she saw his body floating by
the garden hedge, so peacefully,
as if at last he’d found in death
serenity which life denied.
But when her son had dragged him in,
a sodden, heavy heap of meat,
she pressed her head and rolled her eyes
and howled the awfulness to sleep.
David RL Moore
Thu 28th Nov 2024 07:15
Hi Ray,
Many images well painted in this idea. For me it was like a picture board, I read it several times and got the rythm of it...it flows nicely leading the reader from frame to frame.
What I do like about it is the perspective from which it is told, it's a simple idea which manages to leave room for the reader to fill in the gaps for themselves.
A timely poem at the moment. I'm curious about the title... I have my own idea of what it refers to but will keep it to myself.
Thanks for giving me some interesting scenescapes on a cold frosty morning.
David