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AT A LITTLE BAR IN TER AAR

If you've never been there how do you know
how it feels to be told to go back home?
The right to remain and the right to roam
should balance each other. It need be so

if we're as intent as we seem to be
on burning this rock to ashes and dust
as though it were fate. Well, isn't it just?
If you'd lost your home, then wouldn't you flee?

If men with big guns were shooting at you,
threatening your family with rape, or worse,
would that not tempt you your country to curse
and search for sanctuary somewhere new?

How deep does your patriotism go?
Farther than your humanity? That deep?
Did your morals survive a plunge so steep?
And on that subject, be honest: how low,

dark or far would you stoop to defend it?
Could you shut up and give it room to grow?
Could you let it dream, or do you not know,
or care, what hopes are needed to tend it?

Well i have been on the receiving end,
threatened for being in just the wrong place -
speaking English, unfamiliar face -
and rest assured, it is frightening, my friend:

when you're in the wrong place, at the wrong time
and everyone nearby is a stranger
then you will get the meaning of danger
and know that your bigotry is a crime.

MP 19-251124

[Dedicated to far to many people i know.]

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◄ SUSANNAH SELWYN

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Martin Peacock

Sun 1st Dec 2024 15:30

Thanks very much Stephen. I'm glad you thought so highly of it. That's the problem with bigots - there isn't enough space in their tiny minds for consideration of others. I used to hold out hope that such people were capable of change, but ever since the rise of Farage & UKIP, and then brexit, i've met too many with stone-aged, entrenched opinions. We're losing our capacity for reason, and the age of suspicion and superstition is taking over. I fear for us.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Dec 2024 09:25

Thank you for this intelligent, well-written piece, Martin. I know how much time and effort it takes to get a rhyming, rhythmic poem like this just right. A sad subject, but I think the poem shines a light and gives a message of hope.

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Martin Peacock

Sun 1st Dec 2024 06:31

Thanks very much for that thought, Uilleam. It's something i see everyday too, and it beggars belief that others can't, or choose not to see it as well. It's a bit of a cliché to say the world is changing for the worse and people pay lip service to the phrase all the time, but it breaks my heart that it's actually happening. Ever since i was a boy i've felt instinctively that there are no differences between us but those we impose upon each other and it both angers and depresses the hell out of me that some people think they're in some way 'special' simply because of the land they were born in.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 30th Nov 2024 21:21

Thank you, Martin.
Having spent this afternoon navigating the bustling sea of humanity, which is cosmopolitan, pre-Christmas Manchester, I’m only too conscious of my good fortune to have been born and bred a UK citizen. I’ve often pondered what horrors the man, woman or child, sat on the bus next to me has fled. Smiles and small kindnesses, from people born into cultures very different from my own, convince me that we have much more in common than that which the bigots would have us believe divides us.

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