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City

I came here to work

more than forty years ago,

before this town that called

itself a city, became a city

we both, the city and me,

worked hard to put down

firm foundations, to grow

sometimes working so hard

the growth went unnoticed,

my children became adults,

became mothers and fathers

right beneath my nose,

the city grew ever taller its

limbs longer, wider, busier,

I can see its pulse from my

window, throbbing, flashing

in neon clothing, clearly an

animal of the darkness, an

entity enjoying its spoils at

ease with its new crown,

my wistful eyes now make

the obvious comparison,

like my children the city

has come of age, has become

brave, now clad in a steely

confident carapace that no

longer needs my labour

but still dines on my heart

~

© Graham R Sherwood 12/24

◄ Un-Real

Comments

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Dec 2024 20:25

Thanks Graham.
50 years ago I began a job in Salford City; those people didn't put up with any crap; the salt of the earth they were, through good times and bad times, a literal life and death struggle.
"Integrity and Industry" was their mottto. We shortened it to "In Grit and Dust! I hardly recognise much of it now but I'll never forget her people.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Dec 2024 08:37

The city comes alive in so many ways in this poem, Graham. A life of its own, you might say, intertwined with yours and everyone else who gave it a life in the first place.

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Marla Joy

Wed 11th Dec 2024 02:51

Your words seem to bring the town to life as you reflect on your own, Like it very much, Marla

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th Dec 2024 22:11

Powerful poem of identity and identification, Graham, on a subject not often written about by poets.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 10th Dec 2024 21:58

Everything has a carapace! This place is still only a teenager.

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David RL Moore

Tue 10th Dec 2024 21:48

Thank you for sharing carapace, what a great word and discovery for me.

MK confuses me somewhat but I think I get it now.

I had a relative who lived in Wolverton, the countryside around about is lovely.

David

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