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Mary and Joseph

Mary

She pulled her shawl tighter around her
A mother should never have to outlive her child
There at the beginning and the end

She thought about her ex
A gentle man, good with his hands
Who never questioned her unexpected pregnancy
There’s nothing more working class, he’d laughed
Than giving birth in a barn

She pulled her shawl tighter around her
And remembered the starlight
The smell of fresh hay
And the warm comfort of the animals
On the night he was born
 

Joseph

I’d have made a better job of that manger
He looked over his newborn son
One day, when he’s older
I’ll teach him to saw straight and nail true
To value form as much as function
And be a master of his craft

But it wasn’t to be

They didn’t survive the recriminations
Could they have kept him from the temple
Who put those revolutionary ideas in his head

He thought about her in the starlight
The smell of fresh hay
And the warm comfort of the animals
On the night he was born
 

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Comments

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 18th Dec 2024 10:44

Thank you, Steve, beautiful indeed!

It's a sad commentary on our ostensibly 'Christian' society, that 2024 years after the events you so touchingly describe, giving a toss for our neighbours' welfare should continue to be viewed as 'revolutionary'.

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Steve White

Wed 18th Dec 2024 10:35

Thanks Graham!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 18th Dec 2024 10:20

I’ve often wondered about Joseph. He must have been a decent bloke. This poem has an acute balance between the accepted story and some nod towards a form of radicalization. Fascinating how it has endured. A great thinking piece Steve!

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Steve White

Wed 18th Dec 2024 08:33

Thanks Greg!

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Greg Freeman

Wed 18th Dec 2024 08:31

That's a beautiful poem, Steve. Very moving. Well done.

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