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Between two Worlds

 

For my Father

 

In dreams my father is with me.

He lives in his nightmare wide awake.

 

In dreams my legs buckle.

He falls in his nightmare.

 

I see him, we cannot speak,

his frail hands outstretched to his child.

 

His hanging mouth a cave

with all his life inside, forgotten.

 

Asleep in his bed like amber in linen,

withered by time and ages rot.

 

So we meet between worlds,

to stare at each other in timeless fear.

 

 

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David RL Moore

Thu 26th Dec 2024 07:55

Thanks for the like RBK.

David

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David RL Moore

Sat 21st Dec 2024 06:16

Thankyou Aisha for the like.

This scribble has attracted more attention than I thought it might. Specifically by friends and associates who I've known for years and have never shared these feelings with.

Whilst tragic that end of life experiences for many individuals and their families are cruel and seemingly degrading, it is a comfort that we are now more able to share our experiences and somehow feel less alone in the midst of it all.

So thanks again to those who have read and shared.

https://youtu.be/DHzaHMmXB6Y?si=D-Oz1lukXSAmb2bH

David

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David RL Moore

Thu 19th Dec 2024 14:54

Thankyou Stephen for your generous comment on this and to Landi for the flowers. Again to Stephen and Holden for the likes.

David

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 19th Dec 2024 08:48

One hardly dares to comment on this, David. A very special poem.
Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Landi Cruz

Thu 19th Dec 2024 07:56

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David RL Moore

Thu 19th Dec 2024 06:39

Thanks to Graham, Hugh, Tom and Steve for the likes on this one.

David

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