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COUNTY LINES

Mods in the rain

County lines spread evil
across all the living and the dead
their line is our time
we need them, dead.

Or fled to
a spring day in late fall,
when she can no longer cope: 
be tall or not be crumpled or be  a spuperfluity
of hope.

She has lost the lines that link
her to her family tree 
so now the link is broken
and she is free.

Road, rail, phone,
needle, plunger, sink
in an unguarded atonement.
I forgot to think.

Her lines are enmeshed
in this stinking net
that offers her a line to sniff
For free. Woopee!

Crack cocaine, heroin,
take away that once-famed jewel, liberty.
speeding through her veins, her broken arteries,
there's firing in the brain: O yes,this is what you need
her brain's the same again. 

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◄ Schrödinger's cat - Entanglement (Verschränkung)

Comments

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Dec 2024 09:08

I do agree with you on addiction in general, John. I too, see its harmful effects every day.

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John Marks

Sun 29th Dec 2024 18:33

Thank you Stephen & thank you Uilleam. To be frank, I've no data that would allow me to definitively answer the two questions you pose Uilleam. I live in inner-city Salford and I witness the chaos and harm caused by addiction. I do not know if the addiction to legal drugs (alcohol, opiods etc) is worse than addiction to illegal drugs. I do know that all addiction is self-destructive and I know that addicts hurt not only themselves, but also the people they love.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th Dec 2024 08:41

Your poem brings out the tragedy and sadness of this whole business, John. Really impressive.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 28th Dec 2024 17:49

I should qualify my comment, by adding that the sale and use of alcohol is literally controlled by legislation.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 28th Dec 2024 11:21

Thank you, John for that insight. I’m a “user” of the legal and controlled drug, alcohol, and I have two questions to ask regarding the UK specifically:

are the social harms caused by “Drug” consumption (police corruption, strain on the judicial system, strain on the NHS, general criminality, etc) increased or decreased by their illegality?

are the social harms caused by consumption of alcohol, criminality etc, greater than the harms caused by illegal drugs?

My own feelings are that UK law enforcement agencies are on a hiding to nothing as regards "illegal" drugs.

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