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In sleep I see the nail

Pass through the yielding flesh;

Jesus knew about that.

 

But we are skin and bone,

Already. No reserves

Of fat or of muscle.

Bare bones. No resistance.

Every strike and rumble

A nail, hammered, pinpoint,

Into the joints and cracks.

The torment forcing us

Towards strange submission.

 

Soon we could be up there,

On the cross, confessing.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 31st Dec 2024 09:06

Thank you, Graham and Uilleam, and my best wishes to you, to everyone who liked this poem and to all at WOL.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 29th Dec 2024 11:08

Thank you, Stephen.
“Soon we could be up there,
On the cross, confessing.”

Your words resonate with me, a former practising Christian.
Sadly, we are already up there. We, who view ourselves as so-called "Christian", “civilised”, and “enlightened", whinge hypocritically about some fictional "War on the West".
It is with our taxes -willingly or not- that we continue to wage war on on our shared humanity, and on the innocent "others", conveniently out of sight and out of mind; each bomb and bullet a hammer blow nailing the corpse of our humanity to that cross.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 29th Dec 2024 09:54

If we lose hope we die Stephen. Thank you for your words this year. As you must now be aware you have become a stalwart here. My best wishes!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th Dec 2024 09:08

My last poem of 2024. Not a very cheerful one, I'm afraid. But we must remain optimistic and hopeful, and maintain our resolve, in the face of violence and oppression.
See you all next year.

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