A Space Oddity 2051
2051 A SPACE ODDITY
By the Urban Poet
Gas-like mist rolls over the gritty dunes
and strange shaped, granite like rocks
Multi coloured clouds form like plumes
of smoke spreading across the eerie plain
Periods of extreme quiet give way to what would seem like peels of distant thunder
accompanied by a gentle surface tremor
As if playing out a sinister rhythmic sequence
Noticeable though, the feeling of observation
Surveillance? scrutinisation? close attention?
We could be fooled into thinking this way
Desolation and isolation playing its part
A project spanning many years
Yet to yield more than just samples for transporting back to our own planet in
the space shuttle laboratory storage
We can’t help wondering what happened here
Evidence seems to suggest something catastrophic, seismic,
anything living now gone
Perhaps our space scientists are correct?
This planet named Earth all but perished
in the climate change disaster of 2051
From ‘100 More Reasons for Rhyme’
By ‘Rick’ Varden 2023
Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh
Tue 7th Jan 2025 22:09
Thanks Rick.
On seeing 2001 A Space Odyssey, I think my then young mind was greatly affected: firstly, by the use of Strauss’s ‘Blue Danube’, and his ‘Also sprach Zarathustra’, and (I meant to say) the absence of dialogue in the film awoke artistic / poetic sensibilities in my mind. I hope, for the sake of our children and descendents, 2051 will bring happier news than that currently envisaged.