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ISOLATION

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ISOLATION

I dreamed they moved the forest

as I watched from a window

never suspecting such impermanence;

scenery rolled like a stage set,

replaced by things more essential.

 

No trees, and in their stead rose

abodes of relentless brick

and from inside came starry toddlers,

women who looked through me,

hooded men with meagre histories.

 

I was irrelevant to them, hermetic

inside a questionable house,

breathing the memories of ancestors

who claimed they'd seen it all

but defunct as old encyclopaedias.

 

Fragmented Voices, June 2024, Editor Natalie Crick.

This was a difficult poem as it came from a dream and as we all know, dreams are not logical. So it was a hard job to find absolutely the right words in places and to unearth the buried meaning.

 

 

 

 

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Sourajit Nandi

Tue 14th Jan 2025 09:05

"Your soul-stirring words have woven a tapestry of haunting beauty, capturing the desolate ache of isolation with breathtaking vulnerability. Your poetry is a masterful excavation of the human heart, laying bare the deepest longings and disconnections with profound empathy and wisdom."

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john short

Mon 13th Jan 2025 13:39

Thanks Stephen,
It wasn't easy to write. It was rejected a couple of times until I got it absolutely right.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 13th Jan 2025 08:29

A fine poem, John. Its structure glues the whole (interesting?) experience together.

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