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The Most Gracious

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Let me tell you how kind my Lord is,
I share Him all my desires with honest bliss.

He grants them as swiftly as can be seen,
But some take longer to intervene.

Especially the desires I hold most dear,
He wants me to be patient and persevere.
No, He does not mock my mortal plan.
He asks me to grow and be the best I can.

He wants me to receive not just the prize,
But to be ready, fulfilled, and wise.

My Lord is kind beyond what I can see,
It’s just that I’m too foolish to agree,
Blind to what’s truly better for me.
His love refines the soul in me.

 

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◄ The Father’s Serenade

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Yanma Hidayah

Thu 16th Jan 2025 18:05

Thank you so much for your kind words, @Flyntland! I'm truly humbled by your appreciation. My poems are indeed a way for me to express the peace and understanding I find within, and if they can offer a glimpse of that, it means the world to me. I believe that sharing what we have, whether it's peace, joy, or love, can bring us closer, even if our paths are different. I'm grateful that you connect with them in your own way.

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Flyntland

Thu 16th Jan 2025 17:15

I love the way your kind and gentle nature shines through in your writing, I do not practice any form of religion, nor want to, but I would love a small share of your inner peace.
Perhaps that is what your poems are all about - sharing what you have.

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