fleet-footed good

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And as you walk through these familiar streets, 
You notice small details you used to overlook:
The worn-out benches where people rest, 


The graffiti that boldly splashes stories;
The fleeting smiles of passing strangers…
Each moment feels so much more precious-


Each breath a gift, not to be taken for granted.
You accept that endings are part of the journey;
Finding a truth that keeps you moving forward.

 

 

 

◄ into the arms of night

sounds of the day: prelude ►

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Robert Mann

Tue 28th Jan 2025 16:01

Inspirational stuff.

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Red Brick Keshner

Sun 26th Jan 2025 12:41

Thanks for all these wonderful comments 🙏🏻🕊🌷
Branwell,🌷
Tom D.,🌷
Uilleam, that’s quite touching, 🌷
Graham Sh., can’t wait for the fruit of this planted idea!,🌷
and Flyntland, “no waste” loving that! 🌷

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Flyntland

Sun 26th Jan 2025 12:11

I can relate to every word of your poem - and I agree with Bramwell it is a "good poem" it flows easily off the tongue - there are no wasted words - and it has a depth of meaning.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 26th Jan 2025 10:49

RBK thank you for this. Like Eduardo before you, you have unknowingly planted an idea in my head for which I am grateful.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 26th Jan 2025 08:28

You poem echos much of my experience RBK.

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Tom Doolan

Sun 26th Jan 2025 07:25

Well said - Carpe Diem 🙂

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branwell kent

Sun 26th Jan 2025 02:25

A good poem

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