Tidy

Tidy

In a tidy garden, cold on crazy paving, stranded by the shed, the dead rat lies:

reluctant penitent at prayer, thin paws held stiffly,

eyes shut in death throe rictus, tail curled, hugging a frosted abdomen.

Exploration driven by hunger,

the tempering of wariness leading to a lingering end;

lately drawn from Sunday fields, before dawn’s broken promise,

the lure of fat and dried mealworm, the scent of calculated temptation,

breakfasting by an ornate bird table, laid by a neat and tidy mind.

High on a shelf, locked in the shed,

sits a box from the hardware store that sells everything:

unseen contents, palpably present

yet failing to raise any spasm of guilt or sentiment in a Type A personality,

who, putting away the cruelty of it,

burying the barbarity along with any empathy

when confronted with the consequence of a few moments of typical pragmatism,

now looks for a shovel.

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◄ Drifting

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 29th Jan 2025 21:39

Hi Johnathan. This struck a chord with me. We've nabbed a couple alive and put them back in the neighbouring field, but they probably come back. Dilemma indeed. Great writing.

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Jonathan Humble

Wed 29th Jan 2025 11:12

Hello Greg. Sorry it's been a while.
JH : )

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Jan 2025 07:34

Good to see you on Write Out Loud again, Jonathan. We don't have a rats problem at the moment, so no ethical dilemmas for us. But with the amount of birdseed we put out, it's surprising ... a good haul at the RSPB Big Garden Birdwatch this year!

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