Hostage to Love
Hostage to Love
Please return my heart,
Without it I can’t leave.
I looked for it today,
But it wasn’t on my sleeve.
When I last took notice,
You were playing with it.
Now there’s a gap,
Only a broken heart can fit.
I’m sure it was damaged
By a previous user.
Scars may have healed,
But I’m still the loser.
It was vacant and empty,
As heard by the echo.
You took it hostage,
And wouldn’t let go.
I’ve lost it again.
But now it’s not the same.
I didn’t see it go,
And you’re driving me insane.
Please return my heart,
Or give me an exchange.
We’d both be happy sharing,
Our lives forever changed.
Robert Mann
Mon 10th Feb 2025 13:46
Graham, I felt the same way, but also thought the whole thing a bit clunky. I've edited it and rejigged some lines, so hopefully it now has a better flow. Thanks for commenting.