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Multiple Choice

I took the test again today. Turned on Radio Four.

                Listened to a story about the homeless.

                              Then came kids orphaned by bomb blasts

                              in another country.

 

But that was too hard,

so I moved on …

 

Started up the car instead of doing the walking thing;

                it was raining and I needed stuff from the supermarket.

                              Saw a dead cat on the road side.

                              Shame, I thought.

                              Not my fault, not my problem.

 

Turned the page.

Moved on …

 

Joined the miserable in yet another shopping experience: 

                thought,  Fuck! It’s busy in here.

                              Stopped by the bargain counter:

                              cheap factory farmed meat and sweat shop shirts.

 

Pushed that stuff to the back

of my budget mind.

 

Don’t shake that tin in my face, pal:

                looked the other way,

                              went down a different aisle.

                              Bought a 10p shopping bag.

 

Got home and liked a page on Facebook:

supporting Westmorland and Furness Library Services.

 

I’ll take the resit tomorrow …

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 17th Feb 2025 07:24

Thank you, Jonathan. Some might call this a master class in getting through the day! A very fine poem.

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Jonathan Humble

Sun 16th Feb 2025 16:40

Thanks David. Thanks Graham. I'll be honest, it's an old one. Hoping to write/finish something new soon.
Cheers
JH

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David RL Moore

Sun 16th Feb 2025 15:49

Hi Jonathan,

We must all be guilty on some level of the avoidances you describe above. How exhausting it must be to actively care (beyond mere thought) about all the injustice in the world, is it even realistically possible?

The four examples you provide of how we push things away are well chosen, as I think they are quite common among many.

The token effort of offering a "like" to a plea regarding good deeds in need of support is a fine example of delusional simple self absolution.

David RL Moore

PS, This is also (to my mind) a well structured poem asking relevant questions of our day.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 16th Feb 2025 10:48

Fascinating how our lives are a bit like an exam/questionnaire!
Good luck with your next test!

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