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THE EDGE OF OPULENCE

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Feasting with eyes open, the greediness of a good life sets in

A hunger that gnaws, not for bread, but for their gilded ease.

Observing the well fed sitting on grand yachts

Their laughter a distant, mocking melody on the salt-laced breeze.

 

Feeling obscure on remote, innate objects

The rough texture of stone, the humble curve of a clay bowl

Suddenly alien, a cruel reminder of what's out of reach

While they sip champagne, oblivious to the cracks in my soul.

 

The sun glints off polished chrome, a blinding and arrogant light

Reflecting back the chasm, the gulf that stretches wide

Justifying the end of their tinted, peaceful lives.

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Naomi

Tue 25th Mar 2025 04:50

Thank you Flyntland. I was trying to capture that feeling of being on the outside looking in, where even something as pleasant as laughter becomes painful.

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Flyntland

Mon 24th Mar 2025 20:29

"Their laughter a distant, mocking melody on the salt-laced breeze" What a good descriptive phrase, it really builds a picture.

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