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LAST FARMERS

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At the forest's fringe,

Where vines embrace the sky,

A town forgotten 

Where concrete dreams hold no sway.

The last farmers,

Their hands a language of the soil,

Live here, where modern hands have slipped.

 

No paved roads reach them

No towers pierce the humid air.

Here, seasons paint their world in hues of green and gold.

Here, stories sprout like seedlings

In the tales the elders hold.

 

They plant with patient hands

Cassava roots and yams, a bounty born of quiet strength.

The mango's sweet, heavy scent

The banana's earthy perfume 

A feast of simple gifts, in this secluded space.

 

When rains descend drumming

They gather in the shade,

Escaping the world's frantic pace.

When the sun scorches their land

They share the cool of night

In stories gently made.

 

They understand the earth and its cycles

They know the forest's heart, and

The wisdom of the trees.

The world may rush and clamor

But here, in quiet strength 

They find a different kind of wealth.

For wealth is in the soil, and

Kinship in the shared breath of the forest.

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Naomi

Mon 31st Mar 2025 12:51

Thank you so much Martin!
I'm thrilled you connected with that line, and with the imagery of the poem.

Your appreciation is truly wonderful!

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Naomi

Mon 31st Mar 2025 12:48

Thank you Tom.
Yes, the land is our lifeline, and we must honor it.
While the situation is dire, I believe there's still hope if we prioritize sustainable practices and respect for nature.

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Martin Elder

Mon 31st Mar 2025 11:55

Here, stories sprout like seedlings

I love this line in particular. A very fine piece of poetry indeed. You had me captured with the colours and the place. Wonderful

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Tom Doolan

Sun 30th Mar 2025 22:22

Excellent piece of work Naomi. The land is the key to our survival. We neglect it at out peril.

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Naomi

Sun 30th Mar 2025 15:40


Dear Flyntland,
You've absolutely made my day! 😊
Thank you so much for your beautiful message. I'm so happy you connected with this poem. I poured a lot of heart into it, and your appreciation makes it all worthwhile.
I'm so glad those lines resonated with you.

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Flyntland

Sun 30th Mar 2025 13:30

Oh! Naomi, I love this poem so much, it is absolutely beautiful. I love some of your previous poems, but this one transcends them all.

"where concrete dreams hold no sway"

"Their hands the language of the soil"

"They find a different kind of wealth.
For wealth is in the soil"

I could go on and on with quotations that could change the world.

Thank you.

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