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Of Succubus And Demons

 

Of Succubus and Demons,

my dreams are filled with fiery hollows.

 

A grey figure lifts its gown

serpentine the foetus writhes,

my throat of blood floods to drown,

though I'm consumed; the child survives...

 

Followed by a beast that leads

nocturne sun devours the soul,

subconscious in my waking needs

the seventh circle takes me whole...

 

Deeper, Deeper down to hell

redemptive wings fold and burn,

I hear the final hammered Knell,

the grinding twist of screws last turn...

 

A canopy of stalactite

splits the chamber wide,

a golden sun burns off the night,

celestial beasts descend inside...

 

The darkest place cannot repel

one single shaft of light,

no demon nor its dream-like spell

can withstand such righteous might...

 

Fear not dark days that fill with dread

hold fast your beating heart,

no man survives who has not bled

that one more day might start...

 

 

 

 

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David RL Moore

Tue 1st Apr 2025 09:06

Thanks for your reading and comment Martin.

David RL Moore

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Martin Elder

Mon 31st Mar 2025 11:52

This is just a very fine piece of poetry. Love it David. Good to see you posting.

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David RL Moore

Mon 31st Mar 2025 09:19

Thanks for the like Stephen A,

David RL Moore

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Mar 2025 15:17

Why thank you Robert,

I very much hope it is warped in the right direction when all the dust has settled.

I appreciate your comments and reading, thank you.

David RL Moore

PS, It's not my mind...it's the demons.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQ0rEnp8kmw


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Robert Mann

Sun 30th Mar 2025 15:12

David, you have a beautifully warped mind.

Rob

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Mar 2025 14:58

Thanks for your like and comment Flyntland.

David RL Moore

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3m8VUUm7m8&list=RDf3m8VUUm7m8&start_radio=1


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Flyntland

Sun 30th Mar 2025 13:44

"Serpentine the foetus writhes"

" Though I'm consumed; the child survives."

"the grinding twist of screws last turn"

This pit is deep

"hold fast your beating heart"

I hope the heart wins over the mind.

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David RL Moore

Sun 30th Mar 2025 12:49

Thank you RBK,

Antwerp is indeed a fine city.

I lived in Waterloo near Brussels for about two years but found Antwerp to be a far more agreeable City.

I haven't yet seen angels in the trees of my local park...but my dreams are magnificently horrifying.

David RL Moore

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YmJIccPWnEk

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