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Jack's Fancy

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Jack’s fancy was a bungalow,

Nestled quietly near the woods;

A garden and a patio,

A place to store his worldly goods.

 

A haven close to nature’s heart,

Where he could ponder and could rest;

A spot for music and for art,

And all the things he liked the best.

 

But pleasure soon began to wane,

As viral traffic pounded past,

And noise from each approaching plane

Would make his earplugs feel outclassed.

 

His taste for nature’s gifts was spoiled

By chemicals and pesticides;

Attempts to visit friends were foiled

By unreliable train rides,

 

While factory and power source,

Unyielding in their quest for wealth,

Deposit junk in every course,

Impacting squarely on his health.

 

So Jack’s sweet dream of paradise

Had merely flattered to deceive.

Our brave new world exacts a price;

We pay, but soon may not believe.

Environment   Pollution

â—„ Detritus

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Apr 2025 09:21

Thank you, Flyntland. The point is well taken. Some friends of ours are situated near a new development which includes the menacingly-titled 'Collective Barbecue Zone'. The mind boggles.

Cheers, Tom. Your comment is much appreciated. I'm a bit of a rhymer when I can make it work!

And thanks to everyone who liked this.

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TOM MERTON

Tue 1st Apr 2025 16:10

Be you a slave to rhyme or not Stephen, it would make no difference to me.

A much enjoyed piece.

( comment updated )

Thank you.

Tom


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Flyntland

Tue 1st Apr 2025 10:37

A poem about reality,
I live in an AONB. - hard up against one boundary of my field, an exclusive executive housing estate, that has been threatening for the last two years, is in its final stages of planning. We hope it will be refused, but doubt it.

Hard up against another boundary, a row of tumble-down wooden sheds is already approved to be replaced by a large red brick, pitched-roofed 'stable block' with oriel windows.

Sad, but developers are powerful and have excellent lawyers who know all the loopholes.

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