Canal, the end?
Like a wizened old man's finger my water does bend
I feel hidden; surrounded but buildings and trees
I may be murky; a vision of muddied water
But I was once business life’s blood, an aorta
Sometimes I feel ignored by you in a changing world
My skin, occasionally massaged by gentle breeze
Then outrageous joy as a canal boat ploughs up my spine
I may be old and dreamy; in my forgotten state
But I still dream of developers before it'd too late
<Deleted User> (4281)
Fri 2nd May 2008 19:00
Hello, Phil
Nice Poem!
"I may be old and dreamy; in my forgotten state
But I still dream of developers before it'd too late"
Enjoyed reading- these last two lines are really giving a reader a lot of to think of.
GREAT JOB!
Warm Regards,
Zuzanna