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What Do I Know?

Adam Eves he calls himself,

but you’ll not be spat at

if you think it’s a pseudonym.

He’s into nudism.

 

‘Ah’, I hear you say, ‘maybe

he’s a descendant' -- but

aren’t we all? Fig leaves

will never come into fashion.

 

It’s not the best place in the world

to tap out verse on a laptop:

private or not, it’s still a beach;

sand will find its way from a to z

 

and I tell him so. ‘A poet’

he says, without taking his eyes

off the volleyball players,

‘has to take chances’.

◄ Ghost Ship

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 8th May 2008 00:10

Hello,Dai

Quite impressive write. Words etched from the Bible into more naughty style...Eh?

Zuzanna

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Dai Miles

Wed 7th May 2008 12:34

hey, Danny. Thanks for commenting. I hope your fig leaf is big enough!

<Deleted User> (4744)

Wed 7th May 2008 12:30

hmmm ... so you were both on a private beach for nudists? Congratulations on taking a chance. I had a grin reading it. Now where did I put my fig leaf?

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