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BOGIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see a nose
I see what the nose knows not
No snot
Is wot the nose knows not
So
Whose nose is zit?

â—„ The Runaways

Luvvie â–º

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Mon 12th May 2008 15:48

Good Day Shelley

Haiku style…Thought provoking write- well expressed. I came to realize that it applies to people who want to know everything...i.e...Gossip 'that type of thing. – Please, feel free to correct my statement if I am wrong.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

<Deleted User> (4744)

Thu 8th May 2008 08:41

Ahhh haa... I wondered when you'd post one up again. I ain't about to pick at this one. Just small enough to roll in a ball and flick at the wall yesssir.

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 8th May 2008 00:19

Hello, Shelley

Interesting twist in your little poem-
I wonder about the nose with a zit.
Cute write!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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