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Okay From the Waist Up

He’s propped by three pillows

in a bed by the widow, talks to his toes

who’ve been deaf since his back

 

came off worst in an argument

with a car that didn’t stop for tea

at Joe’s café where a passer by

 

phoned for an ambulance.

He watches geese fly through fug

that blasts from chimney pots

 

hopes they’ll not get sucked into

the turbines of a Bowen which he hears

but doesn’t see: same old story.

◄ Feeling the Squeeze

Traces of Her ►

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Philip Golding

Sun 11th May 2008 09:52

Great read. It seems to mirror society, ok from the waist up but decaying underneath

enjoyed the read

cheers

<Deleted User> (4744)

Sat 10th May 2008 13:45

A snapshot from life. I'm going to have to think about the undercurrents on this one.

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