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Eutopia

We walked across the lawn

Through the fields of roses without thorns

Wandered peacefully, aimlessly

Taking every little thing as it comes

A magpie dances circles around our toes

The gentle breeze blows

Your hair into my face, it tickles my nose

 

Minus the plants and the trees

Minus the gentle breeze

Minus every single thing and you still have us

 

Are you happy with what you see?

But more importantly,

Does it make you happy cause you saw it with me

The trees are picturesque

The waterfall a pleasure to witness

Your naked body

I must caress

 

Minus the plants and the trees

Minus the gentle breeze

Minus every single thing

 

This Eutopia is us

 

 

◄ Broken Down

Lonely Friend ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Tue 20th May 2008 09:08

Hello, Richard - Romantic and flared with passion beautifully etched in scenery of Nature poem... Great write. You are romantic at heart!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 19th May 2008 18:39

Hi Richard, this is quite beautiful, I've read it and read it, so descriptive and passionate, thanks

I'm putting one on today, its a poem/song about society that I did at the Howcroft last night, hope you enjoy it. More deep stuff to follow soon! thanks again, Jeff

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