Whim
On a whim we did
Outside the limits hid
In transcendental style
If only for a while
We slide between the seems
A wordless understanding
Channelled access to our dreams
Beyond the realm we slipped
With silent steps we skipped
Behind the background noise
With dedicated poise
That tripped our lips to kiss
Bereft of any reason
Here in momentary bliss
Yet who are you?
And who am I?
No history known
No past to tell
Only a kiss might seem familiar
And on repeat I’d know it well.
For every touch I did surrender
And every breath you stole away
With such fondness I remember
When you kissed me on that day.
<Deleted User> (4744)
Wed 21st May 2008 16:09
Hi Alison - Like Darren I especially enjoyed the closing stanza, probably because the rhythm of the words is consistant and the rhyme pattern well known without sounding too forced. That's not to say I didn;t enjoy the rest, just not as much.