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Sunny Saturday

A surprisingly sunny Saturday

Spent splishing splashing in a swimming pool

Stuffing sausages sat in some café

Skin slowly sizzling in the sun, such cool

Wind swishing swirling shaking shrubs so full

With spring and summer supplements of green

From seeds to shoots to stalks to stamens, all

Supplanting sad and shady winter scenes

The surefire supposition should, it seems

Suggest the sunshine shall subside by May

Shall turn sour, shower-soaked summer’s stern misrule

Submerging streets and smiles, suppressing dreams

So savour the sunshine and seize the day

Soon solid skies shall smear our shining jewel

Saturday's sunshine seems slightly surreal as so-called Sunday sadly sends us the shivers

◄ There's no smoke without desire

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<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 26th May 2008 01:59

Savour the sunshine and seize the day!
That's the most positive thing i've heard in weeks. Like music to my ears. Brilliant.

"Sympathize." Hmm! Not really what i had in mind but thanks for the thought.
I may only be a 5' nothing size 8, but the years have made me strong enough to cope with almost anything. But yes, i do have rather a sweet tooth, creating temptation and weakness. Ah well.

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 26th May 2008 01:14

Hi Antonio, bet you couldn't recite this after about 10 pints!!

Very clever I like it, have you got more than one S on your keyboard? Cheers Jeff

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