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Nodding heavy damp hydrangea heads hang low

Mauve and brown

And snapdragon flowers moulder in the flower beds.

Grasses seed at the lawns edge.

Summer is soon leaving.

 

In the town, bedraggled bunting hangs listless.

Carnival time, and posters flap.

Swallows gather on phone wires

Planning their departure.

Another summer gone.

 

A voice inside me wants to make the swallows stay.

Without their loss, the summer wouldn’t end.

But that’s against all nature.

In my heart I know

That every summer has to fade and die.

But it’s another summer that you didn’t see.

 

And every year at swallow leaving time

I watch them go and I still feel alone.

And long for spring

And for the swallows safe return.

 

 

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Greg Freeman

Mon 16th Aug 2010 14:54

This is a belter, Ann. You've captured that melancholy moment when the swallows leave - and so much more, of course. I'm just back from a hol on the Northumberland coast, where the house martins were getting in a frenzy, ready to depart

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 17:22

Thank you Si -you sound strangely familiar! (Hope it IS you! I've missed you!)

<Deleted User> (8650)

Wed 11th Aug 2010 17:16

I echo what Stefan has t'say here...
i.e. ~ and me too Miss Foxy !
; )
...magnificent heart felt poem & good to hear your recorded words ~

makes it easier for me to read y'words now I know how's y'do it innit

x

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Aug 2010 14:23

Thank you Stef!Don't fly too far away! xxxx

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