Feverish desire
Quenched between your silken thighs
Lips on lips, skin afire
Lying under stars
Skin to skin we twine in love
Each other; for hours
Climactic embrace
A union of bodies
Fall back into bliss
Here's mine from the workshop, all based on a walk through Wigan that morning:
Walking through Whelley
He spies through a window, quick
Elvis stares back from plates
Sunday morning, here
Glass and kebabs in gutters
Stepping over blood
The Kittywake plumes
Wave at a lone fisherman
Bring cider to lips
good stuff, steven. particularly like the second one, but all are good. how did you find writing them? i did a ton of them years back - drove me almost mental! lol
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Steven Kenny
Wed 25th Aug 2010 17:04
I'm finding writing haiku quite liberating! I've started to experiment with starting every stanza of my poems as a haiku and seeing how the structure works for me. Building and adding words etc where I think they're needed! Watch this space for the results; good or bad! :-)