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ALMOST ALONE ON PLANET LONDON

-where the windows on the train cry
just as i
did they witness the same?
abandoned cranes and merciless rain?
my eyes won't dry that easy
you need to hold me
please
i'm nothing but a baby
grey, grey, grey
it's not even cold
and i like the rain
no weeping this time
it's darker then my soul
almost alone on planet london
almost alone

LOUVRE ►

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Andy N

Wed 8th Sep 2010 08:23

close to a song this Dali in places, I must admit - reminds me of my last train journey to London (the other week).. it has that long, endless feel to me!

good stuff!

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Dali

Tue 7th Sep 2010 23:30

Thanks a lot!

<Deleted User> (7789)

Tue 7th Sep 2010 12:57

This is very good - very economical but each line adds a lot!

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