The cloud garden
The cloud garden forbodes a thunderstorm
A reckoning for afternoon of sun
The birdsong quiets, a sense of alarm
And disappointment marks an end to fun
Four blackbirds suddenly fly formation
While solo magpie spies from aerial
Signalling that there’s nothing to be done
As dandelion seeds float by, wish well
An unseen thorn deflates the paddling pool
As I trim overgrowth that must be shorn
Through sheer necessity cut back Eden
Even my leg is cut, see my blood spill
It’s cooled further now; inside where it’s warm
We’re hedgehogs hibernating, TV on
<Deleted User> (4281)
Sun 1st Jun 2008 23:14
Hello, Antonio
Another fascinating poem - I could easily paint a picture of that garden. The feelings are wonderful when reading your write. The only sad part was when you cut your leg and the blood spill...Hmmm...I hope it was just another Imaginary stuff… Great photo!
Thank you,
Zuzanna