Noose
How I long to be a noose
Not the bereaved body alone and loose
Decaying in the autumn air
Rotting the flesh from the bones
But the rope end itself
Clutching at the neck of this criminal cunt
Guilty of robbing a piece of gold
Or for killing tarts
The sense of authority and punishment
Would be grand for me
People would cower at the thought
Of dancing the Paddington frisk to a bloodthirsty pack
I would be the convict’s last thought
As their families watch
Praying for a clean death
For the lost soul on these deadly docks
There are drawbacks to this filthy fantasy
Over time I’d turn into a figure of hate
As hanging was rendered inhumane
People sought me out to alter their fate
I was seen as a chance for freedom
To those who would take their own
I would be the robber
Stealing away a naïve life
My knot being a powerful statement
Over any other thought
I wouldn’t be able to stop them
I wouldn’t be blamed or questioned
When they ask why they pulled the cord
I wouldn’t be able to speak up and reveal the victims suicide note
Instead of being the saviour of the innocent
Removing evil from the streets condemning convicts
I’m the punishment to the silent
The silencer of the quiet
But unlike them I can’t find a way out
Breaking the laws in a desperate plea for attention
Or ending their own life in a desperate yearn for attention
I’ll just be their get out clause
The noose loop might have been seen as a metaphor for judgement and punishment……..actually what am I talking about, it still is.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 14th Sep 2010 10:50
Josh, this is a very interesting metaphor (you really don't need the last bit; your point is well-made.) The poem has thought-provoking lines which cover many scenarios, judgment and punishment on a very varied scale. It's a bold, imaginative exercise worth pruning to a finer degree for greater strength.