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Dreaming

A rose,

Cut within an inch of its life.

Cut into obedience,

Cut into perfection.

 

To extend a leaf,

To dare to disobey.

Gives them more weapons to cut you down.

Left in the ground…

 

I listen to the girls laughter,

Of love,

It distracts me from the,

Restricted,

Dis,

Illusioned,

Poem I was writing.

 

And leaves me dreaming.

 

I dream of her soft, sweet, smile,

As she lies sleeping.

I dream of musicians dreams,

Slowly working and completing.

I dream of friends smiling faces,

As they’re caught in debate.

 

And then I dream of dreaming.

 

A mind frame made drastically real.

An underbed monster that can now think and feel.

A confusion lost in time.

Locked in forced rhyme.

 

As poetry flows,

As life dreams,

As she laughs,

And I lie on the border,

Between this world and another,

 

Dreaming.

◄ These Hands

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 4th Jun 2008 12:38

Dreams can come true..by Gabrielle.
Gabrielle is also the name of an angel.
A raye of sunshine awaits you now.xxx
Thanks for this beautiful poem. Janet.

<Deleted User> (3509)

Tue 3rd Jun 2008 22:44

A beautiful poem. Love the ending.

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 3rd Jun 2008 22:04

Hi Jordan, this is excellent, really transported my mind to a different plain, cheers Jeff

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