Attack at dawn
The morning light, and the first light of birth
Are they the inviting arms of a friend
Or the invading arms of Big Bertha
Firing her shells straight at our eyes; the end
Of all resistance. Curtains can’t defend
Against their speed and distance. Like trumpets
That call us on the day of doom, portend
Hell’s darkness falling soon, each sunray hits
The nerves like cannonballs hit walls, and its
Curtains for Fort Utopia, murder
Of innocent and not-so-innocent
The screams ring out as dreams are smashed to bits
And now our plight’s revealed, is it still worth
Our fighting on, or must we surrender?
<Deleted User> (4281)
Wed 11th Jun 2008 04:20
Antonio
Was trying to picture your write with this scary cannons and the frightening Bertha woman...Not sure what kind of cinema you have been watching when creating this poem. A little mystery there - Interesting write!
Thank you,
Zuzanna