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Forbidden Love

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Forbidden love, nothing's allowed
Senses are shut, feelings are barred
Scarifying is sin, giving is crime
Never come near not even try,

Hurting, burning, making you cry
Avoid it leave it behind
don't say the words
Not to yourself, nor aloud,

Putting you aside, with what do I start?
My heart or my mind?"
Trying to but I can't
because you're with me day and night,

GOD give me strength; give me time
to stop what considered not right
for I never knew that love
could be forbidden for some hearts.

◄ Oddness

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<Deleted User> (5022)

Sat 7th Jun 2008 14:58

I want to thank you for your comment, and for giving my writings some of your time.
We can't run away from sadness, it will always be there, running ater happiness... everywhere.

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 7th Jun 2008 14:09

Hi Mirna, beautifully written, this, Music of Silence and Oddness. A lot of sadness and frustration in there but well chosen words, I can feel the sadness.

If I'm reading it all correctly, a very good friend of mine is going through a similar thing, I will ask her to have a look at your work, best wishes, Jeff

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