Freedom
Freedom is elusive,
We yearn for it when young.
But do we ever achieve it?
Is it not just a fallacy?
Once grown we discover
Invisible ties that bind.
Yet would we be without
Our friends and family?
It barely needs saying,
Compared to a prisoner
Or an animal in a cage,
We appear to be free.
But while money exists,
A man made commodity,
Everyone is restricted,
It is freedom to a degree.
A holiday of relaxation
Can set up so well.
Otherwise true freedom
Can be so hard to find.
I guess we need commitment,
Does freedom really exist?
Maybe when we define it,
Freedom is a state of mind.
Andy N
Tue 12th Oct 2010 08:13
thanks for the entry, lynn.. i'll add my comments once it has all ended, but good luck! x