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Velveteen Tongue.

Got the kiss that I'm craving

The love that I hate feeling

Those sweet little lips of yours,

Worth the wait, I like to think so.

Finding it difficult being a lady

When you're ever the gent.

Scoreboard so far, three me to your nil.

Keeping my eyes blind to open offers

Has never been easy.

Remain waiting ever so patiently

For that velveteen tongue of yours.

◄ Shame.

Making Faces. ►

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Wed 20th Oct 2010 10:25

really nice & quite erotic

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Andy N

Tue 19th Oct 2010 08:18

nice full circle here, georgina on this piece.. reminds me of hugo william's 'billy rain' book - check if it out if you don't know it... i think it'll probably suit your style, but i really enjoyed this! x

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