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When You're Happy You're Beautiful

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Nothing satisifies.
Nothing’s ever good enough.
Something else needed.


Grass always greener.
If life is to be like this,
it “should be cleaner”.


“It’s too expensive”
and you’re left feeling hollow
‘coz “it’s all the same”.


“It’s Wrong ?" oh so wrong”.
But when you do feel happy
I will see you laugh.


I love the feeling
of the sun’s smile on my face.
Shining, through glasses.

April - August 2005

"Damage Limitation" in The Ritz Toilets, 1997 ►

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Jennie B

Tue 13th Sep 2011 12:37

Belated thanks to Mel & Pete :) Am trying to be less sporadic about my WOL entries! xx

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 13th Jun 2008 19:35

Hi Jennie, great stuff cheers Jeff

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clarissa mckone

Thu 12th Jun 2008 21:56

very nice!

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Jennie B

Thu 12th Jun 2008 16:21

Thank you :)

I wrote it for a friend of mine who's birthday it was. I won't say who; they'll kill me! x

Pete Crompton

Thu 12th Jun 2008 00:29

awesome.

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Wed 11th Jun 2008 20:49

This poem should be a song, as it has a lovely lyrical quality to it.Lovely

Mel
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