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At Last, You won

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At last, your real world won
Now you're free to go on
The pretty things that I hold
And all my feelings, were fold,


Take your deeds, be away
As far as you can stay
In your cocoon I couldn't adjust
Too tight, too cold for me to adapt,


Finally the curtain was closed
Ending a play, written by both
Your selfishness gain it all
A hero you were all along,


A great bow for your success
I lost the battle, I confess
But life is like turning wheels
Winners will face their defeat.


◄ What Is Life?

Knock,Knock,Knock ►

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 13th Jun 2008 19:43

Hi Mirna, more stirring stuff, there appears to be one hell of a struggle and I hope you have the last laugh, love this -

A great bow for your success
I lost the battle, I confess
But life is like turning wheels
Winners will face their defeat.

Thanks, really like your work, Jeff


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