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skylark place

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I miss my skylark place

tumbling down to the sea place

sandaled walk along cliff edges

wind in my face place

I miss the song of summer.

 

I need freckle making warmth

when muscles lax into a-melting

as limbs loll and hair is damp

and pollen flows

I long for sensual summer.

 

glitter crunch of sand between the toes

smell of heat on skin

sticky feel of stale sun cream

squint into our mother sun

I want the spell of summer.

 

 

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 29th Nov 2010 19:19

It really does feel warm Ann. Freckle-making warmth is a lovely phrase. I would have liked you to have described the smell of heat on skin and the sticky feel of sun cream more evocatively. I love all the seasons and this feels a long time away. Regards, Graham

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 29th Nov 2010 08:51

Ta Stef - Actually there was a mention of ice cream in my first darft/draught but it's on the cutting room floor - very messy! Did I mention we have an ice cream at the cafe at Chapel Porth beach called a Foxy? And Ta Banksy - Hosepipe bans - how lovely! I'm fed up with winter!!

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Sun 28th Nov 2010 21:59

Oi ! - we've only just got rid of our hosepipe ban up here :)

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