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is this a fibonacci poem?

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Home

is here.

Never one

alone, no.

Enraptured soul mates

encapsulated - twinnedinlove.

 

 

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Francine

Thu 2nd Dec 2010 14:16

Way to go! John's right though... Love the last two lines. : )

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 2nd Dec 2010 08:19

No, I'm the one who put the FibFib in Fibonacci!

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Thu 2nd Dec 2010 08:16

so you're the one who put the Fib in fibonacci ?? :)

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John Aikman

Thu 2nd Dec 2010 08:10

Strictly speaking...err, not quite.
I think the syllable count should be
one
One
Two
Three
Five
Eight
Thirteen....etc. although some folks would do without the first 'one'. Each number is the suim of the previous two numbers so I think you have snuck in an extra line.

Very nice though.

:)

Jx

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 2nd Dec 2010 07:23

Ooh pooh! I think I've got an extra line - I'll just pretend I've invented something else! ;-)

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