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You, Me, and a Shadow

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Beside you I always see
Her shadow standing still
In every move there is she
With her smiling mockery,


Capturing you with her soul
Keeping you close to one sole
Smashing my heart with a look
Telling me you've been hooked,


Dragging every single part of you
To her far away world
Bringing back years that gone
And in old memories you drown,


In wonder I stare upon
Of what had passed, or will come
No place for me, I can see
You've never fallen for me.

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John Togher

Mon 16th Jun 2008 13:17

I like this, the idea of this shadow, almost haunting the new gf.
I recently heard a song on a similar theme called 'Ghosts' by Laura Marling.

<Deleted User> (4744)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 13:00

I think this is the first I've read from you. Good stuff. I really felt the speaker was desperate to take her place.

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