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The Window

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She gazed at her window
Waiting for her love return
Every noise she seems to hear
She ran to the door, but no one is there,


Didn't recognize days nor time
While her eyes still staring outside
A pretty face she has, with glittering eyes
Hoping to see her beloved just for once,


A sudden noise was heard
She went to reach the door
Man with old face, grey hair
Full of memories, stood there,


With a look of fear, she shut the door
Shouting "my love is young and strong
He'll be back any minute now
So it's better for you to go home".


◄ You, Me, and a Shadow

In vain ►

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 19th Jun 2008 09:25

Hi Mirna, another lovely 2 entries, this and the Shadow one. A bit difficult to decifer but, having read a lot of your other stuff, I think I know where you're coming from, and still a lot of sadness by the sounds of things to me, Jeff

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 17:31

The old man of time visits at the most inconvenient time, don't you think?
There does seem to be a mix of wonder and disappointment here but it does make one think.
Thanks. Janet.x

<Deleted User> (4744)

Mon 16th Jun 2008 17:17

I'm not quite getting the full story here. Perhaps if the man was already in the room and she was asking him to leave I'd of gone a differebt way. Slightly too much mystery for me so late in the day.

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