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Fire

Fire in my head

Burns in my heart

Rams in my gut

Soothes in my flesh

A sword to stroke

Love thrusts on it

Up and deep

It’s more than this

Riding on you

Giddy up down

And you in me

The thread is my blood

A psychic bind

A fetish chain  

Which ties us

Always to you

And each other.

 

You resist

A bit.

But never for long.

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fire flesh love passion obsession

Many Penny Go, Go, Go Days ►

Comments

Big Sal

Wed 6th Jun 2018 21:05

Been almost 8 full years since anyone commented on this, but nice job with it.?

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Penny Pepper

Thu 30th Dec 2010 19:28

Hehe. Thanks guys. No comment re nympho... I just know what I like :)

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winston plowes

Thu 30th Dec 2010 10:49

Powerful, this one Penny. Not sure about 'Giddy up down' but liked 'The thread is my blood' and the fire and fetish chain themes. Great stuff, Winston

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 30th Dec 2010 09:24

So there's two nympho's on WOL?
Great Poem - "A sword to stroke" = you saucy bitch :)

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