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Hope

Hope

 

I’m looking for the killing fields,

The stranger said to me,

The ridge of stone is cold and bare,

And barren stands the tree,

I wander on a dismal plane

Mans monuments are rust,

And all his creativity,

Is vanity and dust.

 

I took him gently by the hand,

And led him to a hill,

To see the children playing there,

Quite heedless of the chill,

I took him to a quiet place,

Where humble people pray,

And when I looked into his eyes,

He turned and looked away.

 

Who are you then he said to me,

For I am death and pain,

I ever walk this earth alone,

And all its powers retain,

I turned and to the stranger said

With me mankind can cope

For I am your own brother,

And my children call me hope.

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Andy N

Mon 3rd Jan 2011 12:12

nice stuff, ian.. really enjoyed - when i was growing up was a big fan of the film the killing fields, and it was a cert this poem would pull me in with it's introduction.. nice stuff!

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Mon 3rd Jan 2011 11:35

I love this. It makes perfect sense to me. I found myself skipping along to the rhythm too :-)

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Ian gant

Sun 2nd Jan 2011 19:48

Good Day Antonionioni,

After being n this earth for near three score and ten I find hope and a faith in humanity the only lights at the end of a very long tunnel.

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Sun 2nd Jan 2011 18:32

Very interesting way of putting it!

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