Out At Sea
Sail waving in a mild wind
Clouds yawn at daybreak
Floating in a bucket of wood
Trail of fresh paint leaking
Flickering silent breeze
Stop before the rocks break break break
When the water runs out we will all drown in fire
As the boat collapses
Mind is absent
The world is inside out out out
Ocean opens up
Moment of scenery
Twelve dead sinners
Glistening skin of liquid
Floating just below
Always a puzzle solution solution
Twelve dead sinners
From a fiction novel
Only
Andy N
Mon 24th Jan 2011 08:15
excellent stuff, second what rachel says - lot of good images on this line..
surprised you put only as a last word on the last line however but it doesn't really remove the power i felt..