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A Woman's Curse

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You thought you had your life back
The day you set me free
Trying to build a new start
Far away from me,


You thought anyone could take my place
Ease the burdens of your fears
Telling her she's the one
Getting no more of me,


You thought I'd give up my breath
Drown myself with tears
Not giving me one poor minute rest
With your face haunting me still,


You thought our love would defeat
from me far off and other too near
My love in all your parts shall live
A curse dedicated from me to thee.

◄ I’m Gone

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 27th Jun 2008 21:26

Sounds like you're heartbroken Mirna, but will survive, I hope.. thanks Jeff

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Fri 27th Jun 2008 21:03

Oh i do like this one Mirna.
A true story of survival in the face of adversity, if you'll excuse the phrase.
Then there's a little touch of humour if i may say so, in the ending. Or is that just my warped sense of rough justice shining through.
Lovely, Janet.x

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