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Pete Crompton
Thu 3rd Jul 2008 01:09
Robbie, thanks.
The poem is about someone I Know but also about an imaginary person. They present themselves perfect, but at the same time i read the flaws, in the end, the flaws never mattered in the greater schem of things.
its all about looking at a friends hands as they drink coffee
I hope this does not spoil any imagery for you!
thank you for taking the time to respond and make a comment. I appreciate your feedback.
<Deleted User> (5090)
Wed 2nd Jul 2008 21:51
Wow that was so vivid.
I'd love to find out more about these two people
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clarissa mckone
Mon 7th Jul 2008 02:47
Wow Peter, I know you have a thing for red lips.Im left feeling sorry for this girl, not sure why. You know , you can go to
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vermilion
and at the bottom you can see all the shades of red. Some are natural looking, others seem to me, very fake, in real life almost no female has red lips, not true red any way. its such a cold color to me, a raisin seems more natural. great write.