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Flotsam

Hidden from the world in a cold, dry box 
forgotten until the sullen morning breaks. 
Tumbling from the prison into a deluge; 
submerged in coco brown liquid. 
I flounder without a paddle, 
desperate to swim against the tide. 
The slurry stirs with my efforts, 
threatening a murky oblivion. 
The bistre water rises fast, 
filling my lungs with globs of mahogany 
and my mind pops 
as sanity escapes back to the cold, dry box.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 11th Feb 2011 10:29

Wish I hadn't read this on a hangover - feel a bit sick now :(

;)

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Jon

Thu 10th Feb 2011 17:24

Mmm...nice,bleak imagery in this Kenny! Gruesome,tactile language.Well done,matey!

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