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Vigilantes

The vigilantes of normality

The self-appointed guardians of right

Control the streets and offices, you, me

And knife us in the back as we take flight

But worst of all is when we choose to fight

Then we are hunted down like some poor fox

Hounds salivating; orchestrating bites

Sound of conductor’s baton as it knocks

For silence before the whole building rocks

Sound of the judge’s gavel; the guilty

Hears sentence passed in whispers, out of sight

And must depart; the train waits on its tracks

For some gulag perhaps, or Coventry

The trial over, there’s no chance to see

The charge or build defence. So Kafka writes

◄ 666 - A beastly sonnet

The NHS at 60 ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5984)

Thu 3rd Jul 2008 09:50

loved the last line... so Kafka writes, so dark and a powerful phrase to end the poem, as the image contines, once the poem ends.

mel
x

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 2nd Jul 2008 19:52

Are you on jury service by any chance?
You know, i've had to read this several times, purely because at first read my instinct said, this is not Antonionioni.
It is so unlike anything else i've read of yours.
Which JUST GOES TO SHOW how diverse our personality is when we allow inspiration in.
I did enjoy it though, and can see" judgement"
written all over it. Very well done!
I'd give you a gold star but i'm all out.Sorry.
Love Janet.x

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