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The Silent Lake

The Silent Lake

 

Dark, brown, murky waters
Disguised by the attractive
Waterlilies, pond weeds.
Surrounded by lush grass
And spring flowers.

Beneath the tranquil surface
Lies a sickening past
Of a life, an infant
Stolen from the arms
Of a naive guardian.

Drowned in old fashioned ways
A sin worse than death
Disposed of like an old toy
Ignoring the throaty screams
Echoing through the trees.

A tale of a heart, broken
The story of tragedy
A life gone forever
A secret untold
Lost in the silent lake.

A name of irony
Historic events contradict
Chilling truths uncovered
Of a soul left behind.
The rocking cradle.

◄ Guards

You belong to the wind now... ►

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Andy N

Tue 15th Feb 2011 08:12

there is a lot much to this than means the surface.. perhaps that is what happens when you look at lakes... i particularly like here 'drowned in old fashioned ways' which is a interesting way of describing it but again enjoyed this xx

Philipos

Mon 14th Feb 2011 21:57

This is a deep poem Miss Lucy with all the hallmarks of a lament - they say water has memory and near to where I live there is place called The Silent Pool - such great places to meditate and gain inspiration - liked your poem a lot - gets the thinking processes going

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